#15 Assignement

Hello!

It’s sad that this class is going to be finish. I could learn many skills of English writing and how to write essays. So it was really valuable time. I need to keep writing essays going in English.

 And I hope you guys have a good winter vacation and New Year. Also Christmas is coming soon. Merry Christmas! By the way.

 And you guys know we have a final exam. Good luck for exam!

bye bye~

Take care

#14 APA Citations- Traveler's Gift

The president said. David’s eyes met his.” The words it’s not my fault!” should never again come from your mouth. The words it’s not my fault! Have been symbolically written on the gravestones of unsuccessful people ever since Eve took her first bite of the apple. Until a person takes responsibility for where he is, there is no basis for moving on. The bad news is the past was in your hands, but the good news is that the future, my friend, is also in your hands.” (p.28)

Andrews, A. (2005). Traveler’s Gift. Nashville, Tennessee: Thomas Nelson.

#13 MLA Citations- Ventilator patient helped by music says study

Lead researcher Joke Bradt of Drexel University in Philadelphia, US, said: "We recommend that medical personnel providing music to patients consult with a music therapist to understand what type of music may be best for a particular patient."

Roberts, Michelle. “Ventilator patient helped by music says study.” BBC. 8 Dec. 2010. 9 Dec. 2010

< http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/health-11935522>

#12 I don’t agree to ban corporal punishment

I don’t agree to ban corporal punishment. Nowadays there is strong argument of banning corporal punishment. The opinions are divided in half. I think corporal punishment is necessary. There are some reasons about opposition to banning corporal punishment. First, Corporal punishment is necessary evil. As purpose to education, Suitable punishment is necessity. Currently it has alternative that summoning parents, community service and so on but it is not suitable for Korea emotions so it is difficult to make true. If banning corporal punishment implement without suitable alternatives Educational activities would have problems

Second, worry about teacher's authority forfeit. Nowadays public education is treated and ruinous students sometimes use violence and threaten. So punishment is the only measure left for teachers. And last stop populism is policy that candidates make popular for election. People think that banning of corporal punishment is just pledge to make votes from students and parents. Because superintendent of education is elected by election That’s why that I think corporal punishments need to education..

#11.I agree to banning corporal punishment.

I agree to banning corporal punishment. Nowadays there is strong argument of banning corporal punishment. The opinions are divided in half. I think corporal punishment is bad things. There are some reasons.

 First corporal punishment is violence. Although corporal punishment has a purpose that is education it is violence. So it is contradiction to purpose of education. Meanwhile we control children because we think children are immature. But they are human beings so we need to other way to make that children improve autonomy themselves.  Second, Students should be respected. Education is not one side but interaction. So student rights should be respected too. And Corporal punishment is bad habits in authoritarianism. Corporal punishment doesn’t consider human rights. Furthermore teachers do that just for their convenience because if they punish other ways they need more times and attention. But even if it has effect immediately students are lost pride also they think purpose of going to school is not to learn it just give them stress. Next Banning corporal punishment is global trends. For example Japan, since 1979, they can serve disciplinary action but corporal punishments are not allowed. Also Sweden, since 1960 they prohibit corporal punishment. Teacher can't punish students in addition parents too. And Finland takes no1 ranking in Standard Assessment Task. They respect children's talents and personalities. And whenever students have a problem Swedish society system help them and they think children problem is society’s fault. Also corporal punishments prohibit in 24 countries. They have high level then Korea to get assessment task and happiness.

 That’s why I think we have to prohibit corporal punishment. If we do it Korea will be better.

#10 I phone would be your friend

 

 Use I phone! You can see the new world through I Phone. If you will use I phone your life quality would be better. There are a lot of attractive applications. You can use that with every your life. What do you want? A dictionary? A game? Mp3? Or other things? You can find everything in app store. For example you can check the weather, bus and subway route, a map and play games, take a picture with applications that can make picture beatier. Furthermore you can study and see the movies. In conclusion you can do it everything with I phone.
 Plus there are some applications that you can use mobile for free through these applications. You can send messages in kakao talk and make calls in suda phone for free so you can save money. It is amazing! I phone will be your best friend.

#9 Japanese new police for studying English

English is important for business, because it’s global generation nowadays. Although Japan is developed country especially for economy, they are one step behind in English. And almost Japanese who work in company can’t speak English well. But companies need who speak English fluently especially global market. Therefore they have to learn that. But Young Japanese is against to study English, because Japan had wrong way to teach English. They just taught for test with hard vocabulary, grammar and phrase in Japanese. It’s boring. Test and speaking English are different. But young people of Japanese who study English just for pass exam. So they can’t speak English and feel very insecure. It could make a big problem that they would hatred English. So the government decides to teach English for students in English not Japanese.

I think that this problem is serious in Korea too. Even Korean speaks English well than Japanese just a little. We got a problem of studying English. It might be a global problem because I stayed in England for a while at that time I saw many people who came to England for study English. Many countries invest much money for study English. But I think investing for English is valuable because if I can speak English I can talk with almost country people as well as I can speak English. But actually go to other country for study English fee is too expensive so I agree with that japans’ government opinion because if they support to study English at school in English. Japanese students will be able to study English in tax. So they can save money. As I know Korea has already started this police. I hope that will be increasing than nowadays. Then Korean people will be able to save private education fee

#8 Pearl Harbor

Pearl Harbor tells the story of war and romance. The main characters are Benjamin Affleck, Joshua Hartnett and Kathryn Beckinsale. Benjamin Affleck plays Rafe. Joshua Hartnett palys danny and Kathryn plays Evelyn. Rafe and Danny are best friends since when they were young. They became air force pilot. Rafe has got a beautiful girl friend who is Nurse Evelyn. One day Rafe is assigned to Europe. So Danny and Evelyn are remained in Pearl Harbor. Suddenly they are noticed that Rafe dies. Danny just wants to cheer to Evelyn But they fall in love. But Rafe comes back to them. So their friendship brakes up. One day Japan attack Pearl Harbor. So they have to fight in the war. When they are in danger they help each other so they became friends again. Sadly Danny dies. Finally Rafe and Evelyn bring up a child who is from Evelyn and Danny The message of Pearl Harbor is that is true love and friendship.

 It was beautiful story. Even the background was war.  I could see action and mellow from this movie. I though all of actors were skillful and beautiful. I really cried when Danny died. It was so sad. And When Evelyn and Rafe brought up Danny’s child that was impressive. It was such a lovely story. And I could know about the war in Pearl Harbor. I could catch romance and history from this movie. I really recommend Pearl Harbor.    

#7 My favorite designer Philippe Starck

 He is my favorite designer. I knew him since when I was freshman, I learned him in class. Maybe my professor like him too.

 After the day I searched about Philippe starck. So I saw the many work from him. His father is airplane designer. So He play with assemble a machine. I think it helped to him for product designer. I can feel funny and modern from his works. I really like his product. It's simple but It's beautiful and convenience. I think simple is more difficult than complicate. He worked with Jongno tower in Korea too. I visited there It's fantastic and I saw other his works. I really admire his works. And I want to be a good designer like him. This time to I have to do my best.

#6 assignment

When I was 13years old. I felt parents' love.

During the summer my relatives and my family went to a valley in Gangwon-do. At that time It was rainy spell in summer. But we expected to sunny day because we saw forecast in the day before. As expected, the day looks like it's going to be good weather. But at that time, the valley overflowed and the water was moving at breakneck speed because the day before It rained heavily. So the adults said "Don't go there yet!"

 But children wanted to go to valley include me. Firstly My cousin went to there secretly. And we followed him. Suddenly His flippers were swept away. So my uncle went to catch that along a waterway. And we had a good time in the strong water.

 And all of a sudden, I lost balance. So I was swept away too. In addition, I was in a tube. So I was easier to get carried away quickly. I shouted very loudly. And all of tourist go out to watch me. I watched my family retreating figure and I saw my father follow me on the gravelly field. He sprinted for hold me. But The water speed was very quick so he couldn't. I was urgent. I tried to stand up on a field. but It was very hard.    Fortunately, My uncle who went to catch flippers saw me. So he saved me. And I could go to my family safely. It was relief. Then I saw my father's foot that was received wounds. because he ran on the gravelly field with barefoot. So I was so sorry and thanks to my father. I felt really parents' love.

And this time is that I have to reward for the love.

#5 a surprising story

 When I was middle school student. I was surprised on a rainy day. In my school there is one teacher who has scary mood. She always wear dark Korean traditional clothes and has a pale complexion. And I can remember first day that I took a her class. She spoken roughly like shaman. Furthermore She said she had been a little bit possessed. When she was young a strange monk visited her house and he said she would be possessed. But she didn't want to that. So she chose the teacher. She always like speak to scary stories like ghost story. It was quite interesting and frightening. Sometimes she told us about our fortune. She said I would live for a long time. I guess until one hundred years old. It's my hope.

 Anyway , one day It was rainy day besides thundering. As usual she talk to us a ghost story so all of my classmates were extreme tension. Some of them held hands each other. The story was continuing when the ghost appeared in that story. Someone banged my class door. All of my classmate were terribly surprised. My class's loud screams resounded in the hall like echo. I was really frightened too. And who knocked door was frightened away. Who is the one? Nobody knows that.
 At that time It was so scary but now It's one of my funny memories in my school years. And I believed almost her speaking but now I realized that she just wanted to give us interesting things. So Thanks to my teacher about giving us precious memories in my school years. By the way I miss my school years.

#4 My sweden travel

Last may, I visited sweden with one of my friends. It was great!

 First of all, I'm majoring in design and sweden is very developed country about design. So before I went there I was already looking forward to go to sweden.

First day, We went shopping and go to some design shops. The shops design were sophisticated. All their shop things were designed. such as interior , decorations and style. So I took a picture everything. And sweden is island. so I could see sea anywhere. It was so beautiful.

Second day, I visited one island that has many museums. First I went to Vasa museum. It's a ship. Along time ago It sank to under the sea like Titanic. I could know why the ship was sunk and the back ground in that generation. It was interesting. Next we went to children museum that is next to vasa museum so we went to there. There are a lot of toy. Although I'm adult it was funny. Also we visited design museum. I really liked the museum because I saw design products that I saw in the internet. So I impressed. When we went to our accommodation. The time is quite late. but Sweden has white night. So we could walk on the street with bright so nice.

 Next day, I went to nobel museum that exhibit about nobel prizes and novel award is held in there. When the award is held they give ice creams to people they sell that. So we could eat it. It was good. Also we went to traditional museum and city hall. We could feel sweden spirit. And once more my memory is when we take a rest on the street. I though that is very peaceful. It was very beautiful city and interesting. I wanna go to there again.

#3 chuseok

Chuseok is one of famous holiday in Korea. In that day people can meet their relatives so it's harmonious.

 Also my relatives come to my house. I get along with my cousin so I always looking forward holidays. The day before chuseok my family have to prepare food for ancestral rites table. Usually buchimgae is made by me also this time I have to make that.  I like cook so it's funny. Also I like to make songpyeon because when we make this we usually make together even children. While we make it we talk each other that our life story. And Children make strange sohgpyeon that shape is so funny that look like rabbit, flower, star and so on. Everybody laughs at this time.

  In the morning of chuseok we hold ancestral rites. After that we eat the food. It's delicious and then we go to grave to meet our ancestor to express thanks.

 And then some of relatives go to their other acquaintance. and the others hang out together with paly games or chat. It's very a peaceful time. The time for go to house all people feel sad. When I was young I really hate this time. We are sorry to say goodbye. It's usual my house chuseok holiday. It's happy day.

#2 a respectable person

He is Ahn Cheol-soo. and he is Kist professor now. When I didn't know him in detail. I just though he is smart person. But after I heard his achievements He was become to my role model and I respect him.
 He had got a lot of jobs such as doctor, CEO and professor. It's very hard to get it the job even just one thing for normal person but he got all things.
 First, He majored medicine so he used to a doctor. but he interested in another things. It was a computer and he found computer virus. after that he produced vaccine. Although he was doctor , he succeed to make the vaccine program that name is V3. At that time He had though that he is really sorry to the his direct student. Because the student had to obey him with his dream. but he used to work two things that are making vaccine program and doctor. So he quitted doctor.
Therefore he became a CEO. He was doing well too as CEO. But he couldn't got money because he always thinking about society so he gave the program to people for free. I think it's very hard decision as CEO. When the company stabilized He gave the company to worker.
 Subsequently, he was gone to America for find his another dream. That was economy. He went to Wharton MBA Career Management. Finally he became a professor in the Kist.
  He is great. Also he said many famous quote. When I didn't feel good. I usually read that. It's very cheerful. Especially he said "Finding a aptitude is valuable time even It takes long time. Aptitude job can make passion and that can make the best." So I'm finding my aptitude job.

Hello Everyone:D

My name is Eun Ji. But I have a English name so you can call me Lindsay.
And I take a class Essay Writing1 on Monday at 11Am. I really want to have a good writing skill. Because It's hard to study myself. I think that I need to help from someone who can use English very well. That's why I choose this class, so when I complete this course I hope that I will be good writer in English.
 Then I will introduce myself . I live in Il-san. It's quite far from my school. It takes for 2 hours. And I am majoring in Industrial Design. Now I'm a senior so I 'm looking for a job. I really like my major. so I want to be a designer. Especially, I interest in furniture and living products so nowadays I apply for company which produce furniture or some products for living. And My hobby is watching movies. Since When I was young I used to like watching movies. I like all kind of movies such as science fiction, romantic comedy, mellows and so on.
 I'm looking forward this class. It will be great class. and thank you for read this writhing.
See you later. Bye